the dreams that she had
vanished long ago
when a plague of sorrow
took over her life
she tried to escape but soon found out
that she was too far in to see the light
she lived in the night stalking the happiness
that she wished could be hers.
Her skin became pail and her eyes wide
blood fell form her wrists and hit the floor
cursing this poor girl even more
she wondered through the night trying to find someone
who shared her pain, someone to kill someone to blame
years passed and she became sparse.
food had lost its taste years before
it seemed to her a lifetime before she found the one
who could understand the one who could take her
bleeding hands
he picked her up an inch from death
and took in a made her see the sorrow could be cured with just a little love and a strong hand to hold
Author notes
Written October 6th, 2006
A contest entry
- Give me emotion by LaLaLie.
360 points, ended April 14, 2007, 116 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh my this is lovely. I can totally understnad. is this about you? if so im sorry... but i do love the emotion you showed in this, lovely job.
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for my purpose: 6
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Nice write. I can really feel it. Good luck and thanks for entering.
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i like this very much
. Stina.
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magnificent:)
dude!!!! how can you say that this isnt good!!!!!!
loser
this is like one of your best I think
i love it
youve gotten to be a really good poet!
dont you think???!cuz i do
i love the name and the poem is just as good
its really dark and i love it!
but i love you more
bye
-alec
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