I can clearly see what she needs. She needs a firm hand and free attention, but not too much. She needs to be rejected, not forcefully, but enough so she knows who is in charge. Most of all, she needs to be appreciated for her brilliant mind.
But, it is not what she wants. She wants to be ravaged in a way that she cannot help but yield completely... feel helpless and safe at the same time... feel overpowered and in control... she wants what she cannot have...
I can give her what she wants! She is sitting at the table in the restaurant waiting for me. I walk around the perimeter of the room, looking daggers at her. I stay in the shadows and behind others. I leave enough exposed so that her subconscious must see me. I walk in a circle for a few minutes before she turns to look at me. I turn my back and rub my chin while looking down and shaking my head. Before she can react, I turn and walk towards her, keeping my head down so I look through my eyebrows at her. I clench my teeth. When I get right next to her, I put my face inches from her and, almost growling, I ask, "What did you do?"
She is taken aback and can not think of any reason for me to be acting this way. I sigh very uncomfortably and nervously look around. She asks what's wrong. I take her hand and lead her through the restaurant into the Hotel lobby, across the lobby to the elevator area.
"What did you DO!" I said in a holler/whisper. By now she is in tears and wondering if I have lost my mind. I simply sigh again. People come out of an elevator. I push her in. I push the button for the first floor. I pace back and forth as she begins to ask what this is about. I put a hand up to quiet her and act like I am too angry to speak. The door opens. I grab her hand and pull her out.
"Tell me you won't lie to me!" I say, half accusing and half pleading.
"No, never..." She pleaded back.
I pull my hair and pace about. Then I see a room door ajar and pull her into it, slamming the door behind me. I bring my right hand from my forehead down across my face. When I am done she is trembling, waiting for me to speak.
"OK. What did you do." I say this as a man who is trying to retain his composure with great effort."
"I have done nothing, I swear." she takes a step towards me as she pleads. "I love you."
I act like the words hurt me. I turn around back to and put my hands on my face. I turn back around and walk to her, putting her in a bear hug. Squishing her nose with mine.
"You swear!" I say in a raspy whisper. She begins to cry.
"Yes." She says and looks down. Her tears flow more readily now. I kiss her strong, almost violently.
"Then you love me?" I ask.
"Oh, yes." She kisses back with equal passion.
I tear her clothes off as I say, "Thank you, thank you, thank you." In soft growling whispers. I push her on to the bed, throwing clothing and towels of the room's occupants to the side forcefully. I look her in the eye with a wildness she has never seen in anyone, certainly not in me.
I crawl on top of her. "Show me." I say in the lowest possible voice I can manage. I fumble to bring myself out of my pants and penetrate seconds later. She is incredibly wet and groans involuntarily. I sink my fingers deep into the flesh of her ass and pull for all I am worth. She gasps, but her hips pump in the rhythm as if they were on remote control. I nibble her neck and ears, careful to keep in character. Husky breaths loud near her ear, pull the arms until the shoulder sockets snap with the bone movements.
By now, she is breathing like a locomotive. She is kissing me so hard I think my lips may bleed. I hope they bleed!
"Bite my lip." I growl to her.
"Ungh-hauh!" she replies, and bites gently on my lip. I gave her a gentle head butt and she puts a hole in my lip. I kiss her very hard and can taste the blood. Her head goes back and she begins to tremble. I bend my neck down and give several nibbles on her breast, as she bellows in ecstasy. I reach deep inside myself and grab my second wind. I increase the power and frequency of my thrusts as she is now wrestling me.
She puts her hands on my back and claws at me, in a bear hug that is stronger than I ever imagined. Then she begins to sob uncontrollably. I do not stop. She says she loves me as she blubbers hysterically. I do not stop. Her head goes back again and she makes the loudest noise I have ever heard a human being make. I have no idea what to call it. It is not a scream. Maybe a howl. But it was not a howl. I cannot describe it, except to say that it called to my heart in a way that I never thought possible. I hugged her and orgasmed what seemed like five minutes. Her hugs were leaving marks on me, yet they felt gentle and loving. Her body was wild and convulsing, yet it seemed so graceful and soft. I heard another noise that seconds later I realized was me. Then we both folded into one another. The room went suddenly still. Then there was a gasp, as she spotted the birthday card I had placed on the nightstand.
She opened it and began to cry. I reached down and pulled the huge ziploc bag with the ice and champagne from under the bed. I told her the Waterford was in the nightstand. Hopefully, now that she has been there, I won't have to go to such lengths to get her there again.
Author notes
PerVirtuous
In a list
A contest entry
- Make Me Want You!! by Trixie08.
300 points, ended December 23, 2006, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Oh Baby! HARDER! by xXSuicidal KissesXx.
350 points, ended May 7, 2007, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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No, you shouldn't have to go there again hahhaa one trip to heaven should suffice anyone lol
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What to say? What to say??? lol
Love a bit of rough myself
hahaha
Very forceful and a little bit nawty.. who am I kidding.. a lot nawty!!
Loved it!!!!!!
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holiest of crap. damn. nicenice. great story. fun read. yummy goodness.
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Awesome write. Thanks for entering and good luck
Emerald Fire
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LMAO! I love the ending...so did you act the whole "what did you do?" thing? Well, it was very good...
love alwayz n foreva
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Yes. That was all an act. Just to get her nervous so that the excitement would be higher.
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wow. this was very intense. I loved the being, the abstract converstation and reactions between the two characters. It was so... I don't know... different and creative.
I also loved the ending. It was the cherry on top of the perfect sunday ice cream.
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This is like....really really awesome. Why cant I know anybody like this? *devil smile* You were very descriptive and brought forth a beautifully intense story that definently kept me interested.
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Thanks!
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Damn! You crazy, fantastical, delicious man! Why don't I get this lucky... except about once a month but, damn it, what about right now... Lol. Excellent, heated, intense writing; I am thoroughly impressed and am convinced I am now hooked as well.
-Allura
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This is sensually beautiful, thankyou for sharing with me, Bella
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Geeze that was intense, you can be passionate; I’m impressed. Something forced me to read it several times… slowly. It made me moist. Well done. Amera
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Holy Moly-
I was about to mention break out the Jell-O
and get down to business
What a tale You have Erotically weaved~
I felt like a voyeur with the cam on but that is
ok for I was invited
The biting of the lips~ now that is raw animalistic
behavior...Right On!!
So this is a taste of what is to come and I have
two more to read
-checks pulse-
(prepares smelling salts)
Ok...
Off to inhale the others
Keep that ink flowing~~
and Your Creative juices going~~~
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thanks for all the words and smilies.
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oh good lord!
this was very hot and tasty,
woooo i need a cold shower
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Want me to wash your back???
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OMG MY HEAD IS SWIMMING!!!!
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Ha ha ha ha. Your comment brought me great laughter. Thank you.
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This was a spontaneous write. No editing, no pre-thought. I just tried to give the contest holder what she wanted. -
WOW!
Now this is what I'm talking about it's made you laugh, cry, and just plan out sigh at the pleasure of it. It's so erotic and sensual and this really put a smile on my face.
thank you for the tease.
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Yes, Looney, Name the time and place. You get to go first.
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Deviant plan blueprint requested, Demanded. Impatiently. NOW!
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Just so you know, I've been reading and rereading your comments, too. Apparently, we have tripped over one another or something. Perhaps an introduction is in order. I am AL, but I prefer to be called "Oh, Al" repeatedly in a high pitched voice.
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Oh My Crazy Crazy world. I am back at this poem again. OOOO what have you done to me!!! I'm gonna sneak in and out of this one for awhile!! Cam you tell how many times I read this? HaHa
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No, the stick people don't know what they are missing. The STUCK people have felt it, so they know.
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My.....if she don't, I will!! Just kidding!! I am crazy about this poem...It is making me feel like a maniac...my legs are tightly crossed and I am ashamed I just said that...Great poem....IMAGERY OUT THE WAZZOO .... Wow!! Which you could teach that to the normal stick figures of the world. THey sure don't know what they are missing huh? Great poem. Shut UP!
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MY MY MY MY!! I HAD TO ACTUALLY stop for minute I am at "wrestling with me" WHEW!! Okay, I might need a second wind before I can continue....YesYesYesYes!!! OOOOO how I miss that shit!! Oh, seems like you can only find that once if you are lucky...let me shutup and get back to it...I am ready now!!
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Well, In2it, I have written your seduction story very carefully. Here it is in its entirety, No. Keep on gagging!
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Princess! You way underestimate my acting ability!!! You would never be able to justify being bitchy with me.
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Very, very interesting write, nothing like I expected, way more. Although I must admit that I would have completely foiled the amazing surprise, because I would have gotten all bitchy and italian like as soon as you acted mad at me for no reason. I'm horrible with surprises. I hope all is well, again I loved the write. Merry Part and Blessed Be.
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Oooooh, "Each would would require a special devious plan!" Do ME now! Do ME! Do ME! (Evil laughter.)
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Thanks, dutch2lips, that is a lesson in deconditioning. It is unfortunate that such lessons are often needed, however, many, many people lose perspective on sexuality. Best way to get it back is to push the buttons until they overload and burn out forever. Each woman would require a special devious plan.
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Thanks, fan club!
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Never! There is never enough!
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hmm, you have to love a person very deeply to have such feelings as reaction to his actions.
One side I feel like, wow, lady get a grip, stop being so insecure, other side, omg take me like that!!
, very very enticing, thank you for entering and good luck in my contest!
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You should take compliments easily..... had enough practice by now hav'nt you?
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Speechless
Wow, PerV, your storytelling ability is beyond comparison. Speechless
in...(whatever city I live in....smile)!!!
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You need to read more, Lexie, but thanks.
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Worthy of brilliance
You are made of the stuff others can only dream of, Easily THE most talented writer i know!!!!!!!!!
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