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Serenity

Missing image
small ripples of life
held in the horizon's eye
serenity waits

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Picture designed by Sharcu
allpoetry.com/poet/Sharcu
Written October 6th, 2006

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  • Sharcu silver member
    October 7, 2006
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    Wow! Short and sweet, but beautiful... I liked how you wrote it in the form of a haiku... Well done all around! Thanks for entering
    --Tim

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 6, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment, much appreciated.

    Storm

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 6, 2006
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    Thank you Ron!!

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 6, 2006
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    Thank you Mouser, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • VampireShadow
    October 6, 2006
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    Nice personification...really great poem, good luck in the contest!

    <333 Jess

  • Grey Mouser
    October 6, 2006
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    a very nicely done Haiku based on the picture inspiration. Very well done and best wishes in the contest.

    Mouser

  • Sgt B
    October 6, 2006
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    Yes it waits for you.
    To make the changes in what you do.
    To do what's right for you.


    ~Ron~
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