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Black Panther Dance..


Three paws left, two paws right
Let’s all boogie through the night
Twirl in a circle, right, left prance
Lets all do the Black Panther dance

Give us a wink, swish your tail
Get a free pass to get out of jail
C’mon Partners, get in the groove
Do a few swanky Panther moves

Partners in crime down to the toe
Now let’s dance backwards in a row
One paw frontward, three paws back
We’re so carefree all dressed in black

Lift your tails straight, into the air
Meow real loud, don’t be a square
Shake your butt, show your claws
Lick the mud off of your paws

Three paws left, two paws right
Let’s all boogie through the night
Twirl in a circle, right, left prance
Lets all do the Black Panther dance










Author notes

2/ Write about wolves or black panthers and don’t forget the picture
Written October 6th, 2006

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  • individuality gold member
    November 28, 2006
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    i have a black panther tattooed on my left arm i will give it a oke and make it dance spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...

  • phoenixonfire
    October 14, 2006
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    cool!

    THis is a very good poem! With some darkness, humor and wit this poem certainly rox !
    Good luck in the contest..
    Preeti


  • FifthDove
    October 11, 2006
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    lol, I had the feeling you would be relating to this one
    Thanks for the comment


  • Wolf Dancer
    October 11, 2006
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    Oh yes now this is a kick ass poem and Panthers rule! I very much love your background i have snagged it not that i can use it on my profile... Great work... Goodluck


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    October 8, 2006
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    That was really funny. I enjoyed reading it very much.
    Very good rhyme and cute choice of words. lol
    What is "Partners in Crime"? I have seen many contests by that person .. is it a movie? or just the name of a group?

    Oh, well just keep on writing and good luck in the contest.
    Nooni


  • ma belle
    October 8, 2006
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    Dear Shalott sister, such a creative, fun piece! I was expecting a serious note but boy was I wowed otherwise!! ha. Best of luck to you in the contest, Sis Belle


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    October 8, 2006
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    wonderful

    Hahahahaha.!!!!!!!!! I loved this. This is very unique. Great imagery here as well. Brilliant stuff.


  • FifthDove
    October 7, 2006
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    Thank you very much my friend


  • Night Phoenix
    October 7, 2006
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    laughs My beautiful Shalott sister, this is fabulous. I love the background, it accents it wonderfully! There is enough imagery woven into your lines that I can see panthers dancing in the back of my mind, and I'll tell you, it's an amusing image! Best of luck in the contest- hope you win!


  • countrybabe gold member
    October 7, 2006
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    Good Luck

    Well done on this piece it is great and funny. I loved it. Good luck to you in this contest my friend.

    Keep writing

    Countrybabe

  • Warrior7
    October 6, 2006
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    LMAO, this is soooo good and funny, loved it


  • queen Moderators member
    October 6, 2006
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    Excellent poem dove Good luck in the contest


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 6, 2006
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    I tryed...I really tryed to do this dance.. but my tail did not swish...Very funny poem Dove...you did a great job on thisone


  • Smirnoff Ice
    October 6, 2006
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    I loved this for its originality a great piece nice to see something so different.very well done


  • The Poetic Angel
    October 6, 2006
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    wowwwwww i loved that lmao i cud just see the panthers dancing. the background and the pix is fantastic ... a brill job u did here ..smiles ~cheeky~

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