wisps of silky white
fall free from celestial skies
winter winds whisper
Author notes
option 18
I've 
'ed myself, lol
S
picture posted per JanB
Written October 5th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- As I Learn....(18 and Older)(contest) by Hekate.
400 points, ended October 11, 2006, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Very nice haiku...indeed worthy of the trophy
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congrts!!!!!!!!
best, rachel -
Thank you, much appreciated.
Storm -
Congratulations Storm on your silver in this contest
Gaylene
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Thank you John, I appreciate the comments.
Storm -
great
wow storm you managed to put a lot into a few words, I liked the picture also, great job, john -
Thank you Tang, but me still a haiku (and all other form) newbie. I appreciate your comments hun.
Storm -
Thank you kindly, appreciate the comments.
Storm -
Thank you so very much. As I said, I am so unsure about forms, and although the haiku seems easy, I would find a way to butcher it. I appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Thank you very much, appreciate it.
Storm -
Dear StormGoddess,
I think this is perfect!
(bows low)
Tis you my dear that I should learn from!
Good Luck in the contest!
Tang -
Excellent write, Storm. Such a beautiful hauki. Wonderfully written.
Best to you in the contest! -
Excelent! I've read through a couple of times, I believe you have honored every single element of the strictest haiku. This as an exemplary work in form, structure, content and presentation. Paramount to all this... it is beautiful and so very, very well penned.
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Amazing - you have captured something very special in this write, even without the pic, the words alone will stand the test of time, Well written ~Dini~
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aw well you did a great job at matching up with the challenge
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Thanks Kari, glad you're ok with it. I'm not one for form poetry and always afraid I will slaughter it, so the challenge, as simple as it may look, was there for me.
Storm -
Good Luck!
WOW this is awesome....I love it! You've done a wonderful job sis...the best of luck to you in the contest
Kari
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