For what seems like ages now, to
Open and confide, I find that the
Reality of things, did somehow run and hide.
Given a chance at something, to feel that
I've now lost. From the heart, I'm
Very sorry. I'd take back the days at all cost.
Each day feels like another brick is laid upon
My wall. A shadow lurks and lingers, now
Expecting me to fall. From day one, you held a
Place special in my heart, but now seems
Like somehow, we slowly drift apart. You're
Everything one can ask for, always by my side,
And here I sit, knowing I screwed up,
Smothered by tears I cry. I pray
Eventually you have the strength to see, asking that you will
Forgive me please.
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Written October 5th, 2006
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Thank you very much, appreciate it.
Storm -
Great artwork!
Very well done! You have mastered the art of acrostics, Storm!! -
Thanks hun, I hope they know. I'm sure by now, most people know I tend to be a little hard on myself, and place blame on myself all the time. Right or wrong, it's who I am. Metaphorically, and maybe even reality, the one who would give up a leg so that you could keep walking. Thank you for the wonderful words.
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Storm -
You are one of the most intelligent, strong, spiritual, compassionate, energetic, passionate, and creative women I have ever had the pleasure to meet. Even in this cyber world of ours. Your spirit reaches out and touches so many. I feel like this person knows this as well. Time and patience. Don't give up hope.
Jeannie 
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Thanks for the comments,much appreciated.
Storm -
I Love this. Its beautiful and flowing.. I just recently stepped out of the lines to chase a stupid dream, and im havin fun, but i know ill deffinaitly be back to this poem when ive satisfied everything inside. Its everything that I will want him to hear, when the time comes. Thanx for laying it out...
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