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i see you blind, i feel you cold

i see you blind
i feel you cold
i know you need
what i dont hold

you're like a monkey
that sits on my back
beating me hard
in hopes i will crack

i shake it off
start fresh, a new day
but i quickly find
you're still the same way

i rip off your mask
i'm saddened to see
you'll always believe
you're better than me

i feel i must
walk away from you
to avoid being stuck
in your all black hue

i cant make you happy
so i'll leave you alone
the only people you'll like
must be equal to your clone

i see you blind
i feel you cold
i know you need
what i dont hold

WAKE UP...

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Written October 5th, 2006

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  • panegyric ink
    November 22, 2006
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    nicelythoughtout.

    i see you blind
    i feel you cold
    i know you need
    what i don't hold...

    Nice.


  • LymphBeauty
    October 16, 2006
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    oh wow girl I loved this!!
    it's hard to know that the person that you may like or are into is not the right one for you! it sucks too.
    I loved this one a lot, especially the vibe!


    • Unprotected Heart
      December 3, 2006
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      Well this poem was more about a friend but unfortunately he made me feel as though I wasnt good enough to even be that!