i see you blind
i feel you cold
i know you need
what i dont hold
you're like a monkey
that sits on my back
beating me hard
in hopes i will crack
i shake it off
start fresh, a new day
but i quickly find
you're still the same way
i rip off your mask
i'm saddened to see
you'll always believe
you're better than me
i feel i must
walk away from you
to avoid being stuck
in your all black hue
i cant make you happy
so i'll leave you alone
the only people you'll like
must be equal to your clone
i see you blind
i feel you cold
i know you need
what i dont hold
WAKE UP...
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Written October 5th, 2006
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nicelythoughtout.
i see you blind
i feel you cold
i know you need
what i don't hold...
Nice.

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Thank you!
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oh wow girl I loved this!!
it's hard to know that the person that you may like or are into is not the right one for you! it sucks too.
I loved this one a lot, especially the vibe! -
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Well this poem was more about a friend but unfortunately he made me feel as though I wasnt good enough to even be that!
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