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Partners crime......

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My partner and I agreed
to rob a bank and store
She drives with the highest speed
I just hold tight to be sure…

At last to come to the place
where the gold and silver smiles
And then leave without a trace
together driving for miles

For Mexico will be our destiny
to spend the money we stole
I am sure she will buy me there
a car that fits me whole

Author notes

I just had to do something with this picture......

You are a bank robber

Written October 5th, 2006

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  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    July 28, 2008

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    Hey now don't forget while you are living it up in Mexico your Partners in Crime will be waiting back here in the USA for our share of all that shiny Gold and Silver so hurry back.
    Nice write realy enjoyed it Good Luck in the Contest.
    ED.


  • Stardust100
    July 28, 2008
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    Awwwwww so cute

  • Warrior7
    July 27, 2008

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    LMAO

    I love this write and your partner in crime rocks lol
    This is too cute Jeannette


  • catz Moderators member
    July 27, 2008

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    I knew those empty McDonald's containers had to be good for something besides cluttering up the car This is a really cute poem and I wish you and your partner best of luck in the contest

    Dee


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    July 26, 2008

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    What a tiny cute partner and what a cool heist...Get that dog a car to fit him...of course if you do you won't fit in but hey...keep him happy...this is a cute piece of poetry...Good luck...


  • queen Moderators member
    July 26, 2008

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    your little partner n crime is adorable thank you for entering and good luck in the contest

  • pozo
    October 25, 2006
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    Among other things yes that was adorable


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 25, 2006
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    Thnxs Prozo...I am glad you liked it
    It's the pic that does it aint it

    XXJeannette

  • pozo
    October 25, 2006
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    Lol This is so adorable- the naughty dog I liked this one a lot, good narrative and rhyme Thanks for entering my contest
    All the best
    Pozo


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 6, 2006
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    Thnxs Jeannette,

    I am glad I made you smile...and this pic I found it very funny myself indeed

    Thnxs mate,
    your comments are always welcome

    XXJeannette


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 6, 2006
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    Thnxs Jamila,
    and glad I made you smile...
    And concerning the winning...I don't think I can win in my own hosted contest
    But I just wanted to place my poems and the pics I liked

    XXJeannette

  • Eulb kcalB
    October 6, 2006
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    too cute love ..i love this gives a girl ideas you are going to win my dearest , this poem is too wonderful and fun to ignore..

    love
    jamila


  • Ethereal One gold member
    October 6, 2006
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    very cute

    Awwwwwwwwww this is SO CUTE Jeannette! I love the picture, and your poem is really funny.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Brise molle

  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 6, 2006
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    Thnxs Kari,
    Glad I made you laugh...

    XXJeannette


  • Kari gold member
    October 6, 2006
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    Good!

    this is sooooooo funny.You've done a great job here sweety.The very best of luck to you in the contest

    Kari


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 6, 2006
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    Hi Lostsoul7
    Glad I made you smile

    Thats what we all need sometimes...

    XXeannette

  • Warrior7
    October 6, 2006
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    LOL, this is so cute and funny, the pic is priceless. I love it


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    October 5, 2006
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    Thank you....

    Do they have Macdonalds in Mexico too ..maybe we better drive somewhere else then...
    XXJeannette


  • DarkHunter
    October 5, 2006
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    Damn Funny!

    This is funny as hell and what an excellent picture. Least the little fellow isn't getting eaten!! Though I am sure it's only a matter of time before MacDonalds do that!! Excellent.
    Edited on Oct 05, 5:05 p.m. because ''.

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