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Triangle

She gazed at me from behind,
 As I dazed at her from afar.
She smiled and wave to me,
 As I smiled at her.
She saw me giggle and dreamt of me,
 As I dreamt of her.
She twitter and wrote a letter,
 As I did with her.
She came to me for the day of love,
 As I went to her.
  A confession was made,
From the both of us.
  A rejection,
From the three of us.

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If you don't really get this poem, please don't hesitate to IM me for the meaning ^^ Thank you.
Written October 4th, 2006

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  • Nephlim
    July 14, 2008
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    Meesa no no get it But I cheated and read your other comment . So one girl liked the guy, and the guy liked another girl, who liked the girl who liked him? Complicated geometry and shapes should stay out of looove!
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly


    • Daisuke
      July 14, 2008
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      No Nyphlie. See it this way. Hannah likes Emily. Emily likes Kimberly. Kimberly likes Hannah. They're all girls.


  • ButerfliSpirit
    November 25, 2006
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    wow, last part was confusing. does it mean that the two people had a baby and it didnt work out? i dont know.

    but otherwise it was a really good poem. i love how it flowed. please comment back! ^.^


    • Daisuke
      December 2, 2006
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      Wow... I'd never think they had a baby but no.
      It involves a love triangle.
      There's a She, Her, and Me.
      Me like's her, her like's she, and she likes Me.
      Confusing, I guess but it's only confusing because they're all girls.
      People tend to not think or look at those stuff.