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Strawberry Fields!!!

Strawberry fields filled with many Strawberry bushes and Apple trees!

I saw in my dream,
Strawberries dipped in cream!

Apples and their leaves,
Dropped on the ground fresh.. we then robbed them like thieves!

Strawberries.. all fresh and ready to be eaten!
With some glucose ready to be sweetened!

T'was a Wonderful dream,
Until my mom came and,
I had to get over it!

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Written October 4th, 2006

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  • The Poetic Angel
    January 16, 2007

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    butiful dream .... shame on your mum for wakin you up from such buety lol wonderfully wrote...smiles aunty cheeky x0x0x0x0x0


  • October 21, 2006
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    Yummmm!

    Yuummmmyyyy STRAWBERRRRRRRRRRY!! I'm Jealous.. why didn't I have such a dream? GOD! Well, anyway.. I loveeeeeee your works man..! Keep it up! Loveeeeeeee you!

    Nida


  • shuvi
    October 17, 2006
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    Excellent descriptions!

    Oh hahaha... very sweet... i think u r soooooo in love with strawberries... i wish u a strawberryfilled life... lol... anywayz, a great write... keep up the good work... u hav fab potential... lots of love and cheers, shuvi


  • MaaiL
    October 14, 2006
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    Thanks alot!

  • phoenixonfire
    October 14, 2006
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    sweet

    how cute lil sis..it is a very sweet poem again on the strawberries that u like the most ! a most enchanting and sweet dream..i wish that it comes true for u sweety!
    Lovely poem! Good luck in the contest..
    ur big sis
    preeti


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 7, 2006
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    What a wonderful dream. I would have loved to be there with you eating strawberries. I would have to say I would not want to wake up either.
    You are such a doll, always a pleasure to read what you write.
    I am so glad you are my daughter, for a wonderful one you are!!!!
    Love
    mom

  • Jay Elle
    October 7, 2006
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    Creamy

    I love strawberries and you made my mouth water and my stomach rumble. What a fun dream to have.
    Best wishes
    Jay.


  • hand-in-hand
    October 6, 2006
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    wow very cute poem, i wish i had dreams like these


  • Grey Mouser
    October 6, 2006
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    Such a sweet dream to have. Almost as sweet as you darling one. This is a wonderful write you have concocted. You have such a vivid imagination, I just love it.
    Be blessed and best wishes to you in the contest.
    Love, Daddy


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 5, 2006
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    Well I have to say...what a most wonderful dream you've had I wish I had dreams like that.
    You have written such a very clever piece for the contest. Such a very clever grandaughter you are!
    I love you very much and I hope you had fun writing it
    Grand mom x x x x


  • Keith Drew gold member
    October 5, 2006
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    Chocolately dreamy

    What a wonderful world filled with all the innocence and wonder and pleasures of the strawberry fields within your mind.
    What a wonderful place this must be, like a fairytale a Disney world of delicacies, to taste and touch and swim within.
    Well done little popsicle with a chocolate button on the top!

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