a stepping stone
to another
world parallel to only one other
another step towards hell
broken glass
stained by innocence
unfit to live
their eyes
never wonder
from the sight
of the pulsing screams in the blaze
twisted backs carry her away
malevolent decay
horrifying torment scars my face
their god
is the reason
she'll never breath again
unforgiving
blaspheme
unrelenting
agony
their eyes
never wonder
from the sight
of the pulsing screams in the blaze
twisted backs carry her away
they drag her corpse to hell
you cant save her
Author notes
had the salem witch trials in mind
Written October 4th, 2006
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Man Reiche this has to become a metal song haha. This shit is DARK son... I fucking love it though... You should check out some of my new shit man.
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pretty good
Hmmm... it's a rather difficult poem to understand, but that of course is not necessarily a critique; poems are rarely straight forward, particularly when they're personal, as poems tend to be... It flows well, it's well structured, and it has a certain morbid romance to it, all good characteristics. The only thing that really bothers me is the first verse. The first three lines seem like they should be two lines, it's awkward otherwise. But I might be missing something.
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