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The In’s and Out’s of serving.

The In’s and Out’s of serving.


Several years ago,
I had an odd idea.
Odd because it seemingly
came from out of nowhere,
nowhere in particular.

I was hungry, as usual,
and thought I would go
to my favorite hamburger
drive-thru, The In-N-Out.

It was Founded in 1948,
a landmark in Southern
California and home of,
I think, the best burgers
on the planet Earth.

Everything is so fresh
and, well, I’ve digressed.
Where was I? Oh,

I was hungry (as usual)
and went to In-N-Out

for a Double Double, no onion
and a Diet Coke.

There I was, in my car,
sitting in the drive-thru,
getting ready to pay
when out of nowhere
a thought hit me,
“Pay for the car behind you.”
I looked around to see
where it came from
and was shocked to find
it came from inside of me.

Inside my head, somewhere,
the little bitty neuron
connections firing off
rapidly as a result of
chemical and electrical
coincidences in specifical

path’d directions forming
that utterly unique
(unique to me anyway)

thought.

I don’t carry much cash.
I just don’t. Mostly because
I really don’t have much.
But that day I had about
Thirty dollars and my order
was a bit over three bucks.

So I said to the cashier,
“I’d like to pay for
the car behind me.”
The girl blinked twice

and said, “What?”

So I smiled
and I repeated my request
and she asked,

“Do you know them?”

“Well no, I just thought
it would be nice...you know,
like a Christmas present.”

“But its July," she smirked, dryly.
“Yeah” I grinned, that’s what
makes it so great,
they won’t expect it now, will they?”

“No, I suppose not,”
and at that point her face
lit up with a huge grin of her own
and gave me the order total.
(not much more than my original order)

And I could overhear
her telling her co-workers,
“you’ll never believe this,
this guy over here is paying...”
and her voice trailed away
as I pulled to the next window
to pick-up my order.

I had to smile as
the young cashier was
trying to explain to
the lady in back of me
that her order was paid
for... by a stranger
someone previously unknown,
paid for her order;

“yes ma’am, that’s right, yes,
the car in front, yes it’s all paid,
no, you don’t owe anything.”

I could just make out their faces
in my rear view mirror, I wiped
it twice, along with my eyes,
as the lady in complete befuddlement
was trying to figure out
what just happened and why.

I imagined her questions
“Who would pay for me? And why?
I don’t know him.
Why would someone do this for me?”

And I could see
the face of the young cashier
as she tried to explain.
I could see her smile
as she spoke.
It wasn’t with that
“corporate smile” you get
when greeted by shopkeeper or
tradesperson given out of
some kind of polite requirement.

Her smile was broad and genuine;
full of a kind compassion,
granted when seeing
thoughtfulness offered
freely and without constraint.

As I sat waiting for the car
in front of me to move forward,
I wondered who was benefiting
from this transaction. Well,
certainly the lady in her car,

she got a free meal.

But the impact on the cashier,
I had not expected. She seemed
to be really happy to see
the simple gesture of kindness.
Maybe her day was filled with
unremarkable things
up to that point,
maybe her whole week,

perhaps her life, too,

would be changed.

When I got to the pick-up window,
the young man smiled politely,
(corporate smile)
“would you like ketchup?”
I shook my head no,
while smiling, still watching
the exchange of the cashier and
the lady. The young man gave me
a quizzical look and my change
as if to say,
“what're you grinnin' at buddy”
I took my order and drove off; smiling.

Every now and then, I do this again;
a sort of a hit-and-run kindness
that usually impacts someone when
they expect it least. It reminds me of
Christ’s own love, serving others
who think they do not deserve it.

I don’t get to the drive-thru

much anymore, but when I do

I make sure I have

enough cash to pay
for my order and the car behind me.
Why, someday, maybe,
I’ll have the honor of buying lunch
for you, too.


              ~r.

         All rights reserved,
© October, 2006 R. Braley
               (astralshepherd)

 

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(This is best when read aloud)

Written October 4th, 2006

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  • Tamera
    October 3, 2007

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    Random act? Or a blessing to someone who needed to be heart-touched by another human being? Be it a burger, or a small folded note, sometimes an act from a stranger can have far lasting effects. I hope you find yourself the recipient of more.


  • raggyann
    January 10, 2007

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    this was a blessing
    i do this kind of stuff too
    we are the ones in the end who are truely blessed
    wonderful
    just heart warming


  • klassy lassy
    November 7, 2006
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    Oh my! Richard! Now I am full of heart smiles. You are a treasure. There have been contests on AP about paying it forward. You certainly do that, and backward, too. What a wonderful gift of joy! ~ Karen ~ I'm going to take this with me today. People will wonder why I'm smiling in all this rain.
    Edited on Nov 07, 8:08 because ''.


  • myrataal silver member
    November 1, 2006
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    Ah dearest One -- This poem will forever rings in my heart. I have returned and now I read it again and again. Thank you for the tender soul you are, and for your spiritual depth. Thank you also for being the friend you are.

    Love

    Myra


  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    October 23, 2006
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    I am so glad to have read this today. Even through I was not the recipient, I witnessed a random act of kindness too...a young woman, probably around my age, used herself as an anchor to help a man who had broken his foot and was struggling to get off of the bus. I could've cried in the very spot, for although any one of us who was standing there ate the time (me included) could've helped, but none of us moved to. I could tell it really made this man's day. He smiled. It made me wonder if he had ever been the recipient of such a blessed, unselfish act.

    The second to last stanza stands out to me. I think many people, even those who seem to have it all, could often use a reminder that they are worthy of love and cared for, even if by strangers. This story is so poignant, and holds an artistic flair only you seem to possess. I am glad this has won a trophy--but moreso that it has touched lives.



    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora


  • ma belle
    October 22, 2006
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    Congratulations, dear Richard, on your bronze trophy. I am most happy for you. My best and God bless, Belle


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    October 22, 2006
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    This is wonderful. A real practical way to do someting to make someone elses day. I like ther idea God bless you, Mark

  • Gogetalife
    October 16, 2006
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    What a wonderful act of kindness..this was beautifully written also..best of luck


  • Touchof1der silver member
    October 6, 2006
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    I took your suggestion to heart and did in fact read this aloud. Unbeknownst to me, my 22 year old son was also listening to the words as opposed to giving the tv his attention. Once I got to the end, he burst out with enthusiasm, "That was great mom!" I had to giggle and reply with a, "Thanks! But I didn't write it." To which he responded, "Oh, well that's too bad because I really liked it." Although this is merely one comment, I wanted you to know that your words were appreciated and admired by TWO individuals. I feel so drawn by your profound thoughts. Don't ever stop sharing them with us Richard!
    ♥ Touchof1der

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    October 5, 2006
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    This is just wonderful, I would expect nothing less from such a kin hearted person such as yourself. However, have you ever noticed no matter where you come from, you always order a diet coke with a burger, as if the diet coke will cancel out all of the calories, we're consuming... crazy aren't we.... just a thought.

    Brilliant write

    Karen

  • sophia heart
    October 5, 2006
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    brilliantly written

    you have lifted my heart with your poem and i will be hoping to be in the car that is blessed by your gift of giving. truly touching, sophia.

  • myrataal silver member
    October 5, 2006
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    LOVELY

    My dearest Richard --

    How I would LOVE to be in the car in FRONT of you! Would you please accept my payment?

    You have uplifted my spirit and turned my face into a sunny smile. Thank you for being such a lovely soul. Your work always inspires me and I am sure all of the other readers on this website.

    Thank you for being the neat guy you are.

    Love

    Myra

  • aeg1290
    October 4, 2006
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    You've brightened my day. Thank you.


  • MagicLady silver member
    October 4, 2006
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    A drive by~ act of kindness.

    I heard of a movement, not sure where, but it was called

    Random acts of kindness, instead of random acts of violence.

    You are just like that, ~r.

    Cheryl

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