Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
I open my eyes
To a bright morning
Looking forward to meeting
Someone for whom I think, I知 falling
Head over heels.
What is this happening
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
I get up everyday smiling
I look myself into the mirror
I try to figure
Is it really me
Or I知 still dreaming!
My eyes are shining
Face is glowing
Heart is jumping
And all I知 thinking
If I知 dreaming
Oh God! May it be never ending!
What is this happening
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
I get my self together telling
I need to stop thinking
I should stop having
All the emotions racing
Through my mind, heart & soul
The more I知 trying
The more I知 falling
Head over heels
What am I doing?
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
Nothing seems to be working
All my efforts are going in vain
I seem to be loosing control
Over my mind, heart & soul
It seems everything
Inside me, around me
Simply wanting
To go closer to him
All the time to see him
To feel him
To be next to him
What is it in him?
That keeps me wanting
To go over & over
Go closer & closer to him.
Why is he affecting me
In such a way
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
Have you ever felt everything
In jut one moment
When you are smiling
With tears flowing
Mind stops working
Heart starts controlling
You are sweating in cold
Stomach is churning
Because its exciting
To be around someone
To be with that one
Who all of a sudden
Gives you池e life
A very special meaning
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
My mind for the very first time
Along with my heart
Seems to be working
Towards the same thing
To accept he痴 the one
With whom I知 meant to be
No matter for how much time
I知 happy to be
Beside, with him
Even though it can be
Scary at times
But it痴 something
I feel is right
Because it feels right
What is it?
It痴 not what my friends are telling
It can稚 be the 4-letter word
From what I致e been hiding
Only if you could tell me
What is it I知 feeling!
What ever I知 feeling
It sure makes
My days brighter
My Nights shinier
Life happier
Then still why is I知 all that scared
Only If you could me
What is it really I知 feeling!
Author notes
Written October 4th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- You used to make me feel special now I feel like shit by melodramatic emo.
350 points, ended October 24, 2006, 26 entries
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One wonders if you ever did relent to the word that you have hid or does it lie dormant still, awaiting the spark to push you over the hill
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Great emotions stated in this poem I like the use of assonance in this it flows nice too
;f Cara
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Thanks Cara
Thanks hun for your ongoing pillar like support, I truly appreciate your time and sweet comments... Love the yahooing applauds.. take good care now... Minoo
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Captured
You captured the emotions so well here. But only first read for project. still reading...Look for the wow's..This is gonna be tough yah know?
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Thanks Ned
Thanks Ned for your support and all your help... I'm following your poetry trail you are leaving for me
- Nothing is tough for the ol'fella 
, I'm sure... keep reading and I'll keep following the trail mix for my project .. thanks again for your time... take care Minoo
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this is nice! love can be such a confusing emotion, we don't really know if we are in love or just infatuated...it's so hard to discern!
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Ah ha! This is a feeling I know all too well. Within my clique of friends I was well known for being anti-love miss independent who was never going to fall in love with someone, never gonna get married, never gonna have kids..
And then wam! This feeling of actually wanting to get up in the morning and face the mirror with the hope that I would get to see him.
Now, we have been dating for over a year, and are hopelessly in love, and I can no longer avoid admitting it.
Love isn't so bad afterall!
They say when emotions begin to rule and logic and thought fly out the window, then love is pure... I don't know, but anyways.. Gorgeous write darling!
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lol thats ok I dont mind when ever you have the time is fine take things slowly life flies by quickly enough
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Oh God! I am soooooooo very sorry for such delayed reply, I never meant to do this. You put in effort & time to read my work and I don't even reply back, that is plain wrong. But I really didn't mean not to reply. Thank you so much for taking time and saying such kind words about my poem. Once again Thanks & I'm sorry :-(
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hmmm this was very well done it was interesting I like the last lines it sounds pretty nice anyways great write
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