Loneliness
may be a lost soul
alone
a fallen angel burdened
with loss of happiness
the I-love-you fallen
the kill-me blood fantasy:
a night
of nothingness
Loneliness
may be dreams
of pain
which kiss me
with a kiss
myra
Author notes
I used all your titles in the same order. 
PhotoArt: Myra 2006 -- No Company for Tea
Written October 4th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Give me something different by Lauren Noir.
400 points, ended October 15, 2006, 34 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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and touch me
with a touch
Love of any kind at all
is never Love too much
Write me
with a word
and kill me
with that kiss
Love of any kind at all
is Love we must not miss...
Kill me Myra.
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Many congratulations on your bronze in this contest
Gaylene
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The depth of your poetry never ceases to amaze me. You drive the message home with every line. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long -
Yay!! What a great poem! Very very well done on using all the titles and wntwinging them into a great poem! I read it through and thought "Wow" then realised that you used the titles and thought "WOW" how clever very well used and lovely scene set
Well done and good luck
Thank you for entering
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I have been in a crowded room and felt the pinch of "loneliness". Focusing on nothing and everything all at once causes that in me sometimes. I love that this work is not verbose but simple, and engulfing. I wish you the very best in this challenge dear sister.
"a fallen angel burdened
with loss of happiness"
I see this angel in the mirror n ocassion.
Much LOVE & Many Blessings ♥
Renee
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We all feel this at some point, this is a very well written piece,
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ah loneliness, it wiles away its time in hearts, ready to pounce. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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