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The Flow

I think I'm experiencing an emotional eclipse
you can overtake fears of loving a brother with one kiss from your lips
make me forget about losing another with your hands on my hips
you listen to the rhythm of my innocence
even though my body language sometimes don't make sense
i wonder if I can get into you without getting deep
you define that ultimate high that keeps me from falling asleep
I'm locked on you like the dreads on your head
twisted so tight I toss and turn in ma bed

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Its not finished and if anyone can help me finish it...ill be greatful
Written October 4th, 2006

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