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Let Go

Ask not the things I once knew
Of trust held in eyes so true

Captive of heart's pure essence
Prisoned as lonesome peasants

Words spoke soft without meaning
Cruelty has been demeaning

Yet you say, love's in your heart
Been there from the very start

How can love be so blinding
The fool I was, I'm finding

Trapped within, sacred trust
Evade your lies, now I must

Escape the pain holding me
Let me go and set me free

Release me from prison's bond
This heart, soul, already gone

Let me find true love again
And bring this pain, to an end

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Written October 3rd, 2006

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 5, 2006
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    Thank you for the comment,much appreciated.

    Storm

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    October 5, 2006
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    Just beautiful

    Your words float toward me and carry me away. Beautiful beautiful writing.

  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    October 3, 2006
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    Thank you for the comments, appreciate it.

    Storm

  • Divinus A-Vates
    October 3, 2006
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    Found once love...overwhelming and consuming...feeling the way and with little trust...in the self shaped mind was this not congruent...every little corner looking round...as out of line as if you'd stayed. The only escape from an old self: To see a different self in the mirror of a lover's eyes. You've led me eloquently, with your words, along inside your want...thank you...I enjoyed being there.