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Halloween Haunting

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Halloween Haunting

The harsh crisp air of autumn,
was full of howling hysteria.
Haunting hearsay folklore creatures,
beneath the climbing wisteria.

Historic tale of Sleepy Hollow,
horrible sounds as night unfolds.
Steeped in habitual tradition,
leaves heaped in orange and golds.

Time for scary to replace humdrum,
ghost and goblins roam the streets.
Monsters with hooks for their hands,
knocking on doors, begging for treats.


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1 harsh
2 howling
3 hysteria
4 haunting
5 hearsay
6 historic
7 hollow
8 horrible
9 habitual
10 heap
11 hook
12 humdrum

Written October 3rd, 2006

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  • Sandygram silver member
    October 8, 2006
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT THANK YOU!!!!!

    AH thank you so much for this nice comment. I to read it to my grandaughter. She loved it. Take care, Sandy


  • Shakes-spear
    October 8, 2006
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    This was fun to read and something I'll have to read the grandchildren. Good luck in the contest, The Shaker

  • Linda Sue silver member
    October 5, 2006
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    Very good. This is a challenging word bank. I like what you did with it. Good luck in the contest. I hope you win the "ghould" trophy. ~ Linny


  • Frogzter gold member
    October 5, 2006
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    Wow I can't believe how well you packed all those words from the bank into just a few short stanza's. This is incredible. The contest is going to be a booger to judge. Happy haunting and thanks for entering!
    Best wishes,
    Frog~


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 3, 2006
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    haunting~

    A wonderful poem of Halloween and very good use of the word bank as well..
    Love the flying ghost...
    Best of luck in the contest
    Susan~~~


  • Ladybug
    October 3, 2006
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    hey it is that time again for the gobblins to go dancing around town for trick and treat!
    you did a great job in the image of spooks.

    Tamara


  • Frozentearz
    October 3, 2006
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    OOOOh I am loving this contest and dreading it lol.
    some great work going one this chilly October night,
    This was great Sandy and I love the ghost just flying around
    up there giving a little extra life to the tale,
    This was fun to read, and a great usage of the word bank,
    I love how you used the word humdrum '
    Time for scary to replace humdrum" was wondering how people were going to sneak that in,
    Wonderful Job.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • Puppydog gold member
    October 3, 2006
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    A TRULY WONDERFUL POEM

    Sandy, I can close my eyes and see the children going from door to door in their costumes, I always enjoyed this time of year.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    October 3, 2006
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    Wow, awesome, incredible job with the word bank. This is a great Halloween story! You have wonderful creativity and imagination. Good luck in the contest. Jeannie

  • pozo
    October 3, 2006
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    This was a really well written poem about autumn. I liked the way which you described Halloween here, it seemed quite dark
    All the best
    Pozo


  • daviscth
    October 3, 2006
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    Kudos

    Wow!! You done such a great job with this. Its a wonderful write. I wish you the best of luck in this contest, Cathy


  • eyesofanangel524
    October 3, 2006
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    You did well using the word bank. You portrayed an average day emerging into a day of wonderment. Descriptive and whimsical. I loved this. Keep writting and let your words and imagination be heard. Good luck in the contest. Dawn


  • soulfultia gold member
    October 3, 2006
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    very good

    Great visual journey through your write. Love the ghost!!!! You did yourself proud pulling the word bank . Nice flow and halloween tale! Loved it ~Tia

  • Kari gold member
    October 3, 2006
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    awesome!

    This was wonderful.You used the word bank very wise.Awesome job.I love that ghost flying! Good luck in the contest!

    Kari


  • bwalker
    October 3, 2006
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    That was realy good. fall and halloween are my favorite times so to me that makes it 10 times better

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    October 3, 2006
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    Very good Sandy. And the picture goes so well with it too.
    An awesome description of Halloween. Couldn't of said it better myself. Good luck in the contest.
    Brian

  • Lisa Haslett
    October 3, 2006
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    Great poem

    Great poem,Happy early Halloween!Keep on writing with that pen!I always enjoy Halloween every year!Have a good day!Lisa K Haslett Raytown Mo.


  • esroddo silver member
    October 3, 2006
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    You did a amazing job on this write.

    Wow that was wonderful I know it was a little hard to us some of those word. And you pulled it off wonderfully. I enjoyed it very very much. Good luck (Lisa)

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