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My Friend Mr.Serious

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Mr. Serious

A deep thinker in thought is he,
sometimes frustrated with a frown.
Uses big words, that I've never heard,
I can turn his frown upside down.

Sometimes its easy to misunderstand,
my feelings get in disarray.
But the friendship we share, forever there,
always helps take the blues away.

Friends in faith are friends indeed,
sharing God's love we are blessed.
Help my faith grow, more then you know,
thank you my friend, you're the best.

A forever friend means a friend for life,
friends through the good and bad.
Bringing sunshine into each others lives,
being there when the other is sad.

This morning I shall thank you my friend,
with you the sun shall always peek.
Clouds will always have a silver lining,
for that, here's a kiss on the cheek.


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For my dear friend and wonderful poet Arsenic-
Written October 3rd, 2006

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  • Wee Beastie
    October 3, 2006
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    two paws up

    this is a wonderful poem and it is nice that you are writing it for your friend
    the picture up on top is sweet and funny

    ~~Chef W.B.
  • nikki4
    October 3, 2006
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    nice write really made me think how much i don't thank my friends enough for being there!! i really wanna thank them so much right now because i do think friends are great but sometimes you jsut forget how great so thanks!

  • Imposing Snail
    October 3, 2006
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    Lovely

    This is very, very nice.. It's got a great flow and gets your appriciation of your friendship across very nicely.

    Good work

  • shzoosyQ gold member
    October 3, 2006
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    what a lovely upbeat write!...it flowed perfectly Sandy...friendship is a wonderful thing....peace and harmony...desi
  • Touchng Truth
    October 3, 2006
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    Excellent

    A wonderful tribute to friendship, very uplifting and a real pleasure to read, very well done...take care.. best wishes.. Paul
  • agatha7
    October 3, 2006
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    BRAVO

    GOOD WRITE! WHAT A LUCKY PAIR OF FRIENDS

  • AmazinJason
    October 3, 2006
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    This is absolutely wonderful!
    I love friendship.

  • ashleyheartsyou
    October 3, 2006
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    this is such an amazing portrayal of friendship! i especially love the lines
    "This morning I shall thank you my friend,
    with you the sun shall always peek.
    Clouds will always have a silver lining,
    for that, here's a kiss on the cheek."

    those are some really strong words. great job!

  • Angels Delight
    October 3, 2006
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    Sandy...Honey

    I just love this...It's simply wonderfully written and it brought a smile to my face...Which is not easy today...So I am thanking you for doing this poem today...

    Love you always my friend
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