A deep thinker in thought is he,
sometimes frustrated with a frown.
Uses big words, I've never heard,
I can turn his frown upside down.
Sometimes easy to misunderstand,
my feelings get in disarray.
Friendship we share, forever there,
always helps take the blues away.
Friends in faith are friends indeed,
sharing God's love we are blessed.
Help faith grow, more then you know,
thank you my friend, you're the best.
A forever friend, a friend for life,
friends through the good and bad.
Bring sunshine into each others lives,
being there when the other feels sad.
This morning I thank you my friend,
with you sunshine shall always peek.
Clouds always have a silver lining,
for that, here's a kiss on the cheek.
Author notes
For my dearest friend for 3 1/2 years and wonderful poet Michael (Arsenic-) He is overseas and I miss him. Can't wait till he is home safe and sound.
In a list
A contest entry
- A Friend to Treasure by BluRosePoet8488.
1000 points, ended November 3, 2008, 30 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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An absolutely wonderful write. Beautiful, simply beautiful! This is well expressed. Thanks for entering. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
~Donna~
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two paws up
this is a wonderful poem and it is nice that you are writing it for your friend
the picture up on top is sweet and funny
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nice write really made me think how much i don't thank my friends enough for being there!! i really wanna thank them so much right now because i do think friends are great but sometimes you jsut forget how great so thanks!
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Lovely
This is very, very nice.. It's got a great flow and gets your appriciation of your friendship across very nicely.
Good work -
what a lovely upbeat write!...it flowed perfectly Sandy...friendship is a wonderful thing....peace and harmony...desi
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Excellent
A wonderful tribute to friendship, very uplifting and a real pleasure to read, very well done...take care.. best wishes.. Paul
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BRAVO
GOOD WRITE! WHAT A LUCKY PAIR OF FRIENDS
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This is absolutely wonderful!
I love friendship. -
this is such an amazing portrayal of friendship! i especially love the lines
"This morning I shall thank you my friend,
with you the sun shall always peek.
Clouds will always have a silver lining,
for that, here's a kiss on the cheek."
those are some really strong words. great job! -
Sandy...Honey
I just love this...It's simply wonderfully written and it brought a smile to my face...Which is not easy today...So I am thanking you for doing this poem today...
Love you always my friend
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