Pondering what words to use...
Putting down what's on my mind.
People haven't heard the news...
Poetry is in it's prime.
Oblivion is where this was hidden.
Out it comes to surprise everyone!
Obviously it needs to be written.
Otherwise it speaks to none!
Eventually the course will change;
Evolving words come together.
Enticing the entire brain;
Everlasting there forever.
Memorizing subconsciously...
Mysteriously seeming magic.
Mesmerizing momentarily....
Making the end seem tragic.
Author notes
Anything you need me to explain,
ask and answers you shall gain.
Written October 3rd, 2006
A contest entry
- True Poetry by hks.
300 points, ended October 23, 2006, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I have never seen this kind of acrostic before.
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very neat i love it the title is very cool i lvoe it keep it up..
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simply beautiful. I don't know what to say other than that.
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lol
this was great
i love the title
i was looking for poems with good titles to help me understnad it
but this 1 is pretty clear so the title suits it nicely -
Hehe first thing that caught my eye was the use of the word POEM to each first letter of each line of each stanza. As usual your write was beautiful expressing well the essence of poetry and still with your comanding nature. Mmm Loved it my lil Kadin.
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