A daughters love is pure and sweet
A daughters love is gentle and neat
Don't worry mama I am here
I will not leave you I am near
Craving the worlds that you will say
I will take your advice someday
A daughters love is pure and sweet
A daughters love is gentle and neat
Wanting your love and all affection
Your heart is like a sweet obsession
I will take away your sadness and sorrows
Just sit here next to me until tomorrow
A daughters love is pure and sweet
A daughters love is gentle and neat
Don't run away or be afraid
Your daughter is here and always to stay
I take the memories of laughter and love
Some day you will be waiting from up above
A daughters love is pure and sweet
A daughters love is gentle and neat
When you are gone I will remember
Our favorite holidays that fall in December
The times that we have always shared
Will remind me, not to be scared
A daughters love is pure and sweet
A daughters love is gentle and neat
© Chantelle Tessmer, All rights reserved
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BlkVampiress - Prewrite
This is about my mother ... she is my best friend and my angel ... she is dying of lung cancer and diabetes ... she is not doing good right now ... but she is always in my heart and in my mind ... even more now then ever ... if you could do me the favor of preying for her it would be great ... anything could help right now ... thanx alot
Written October 3rd, 2006
Right now I am all about my mother ... It may not be the best poem ever written ... but it means a lot to me and my mom ... so I just wanted to share ... I know it's not my best prewrite ... but it's about my mom ... and that's what matters to me write now
A contest entry
- [CONTEST] Round 1; Intriguing Personas, Impacted Lives by MissPennyLane.
300 points, ended September 20, 2007, 37 entries
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Aw... It's is so cute! *pets the kitty* Now, lets talk about the poem! Aw... It's so cute! Um... There's a problem, though... I really like this poem, but I had a limit.
You could only use the word love/hate 10 times, or less. You used it 12 times. You could re-enter this poem, but you'd have to use less of the word love. Thank for tryin' out my contest! 
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This is really great. I love the repeated part about a daughters love, and I know a lot of the feelings you described as I love my mom too!
I'm sorry about your mom -
Think many daughters have these kind of poems about their mothers, and vice versa. We are always connected, no matter what comes between us during the years. Liked this write.
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very nice. i'm sorry for your mom, my prayers go out to you. thanks for entering =)
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This is a sad poem but it is awesome and some how inspiring at the same time you did an awesome job with the words and flow -
Thank you for the entry, I like the way you have the repetition in your poem. It was wonderful. Thank you for following the rules, and good luck
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This is good! It really shows a daughters love. Great write!
Good Luck!
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Princess Padge
Happy Holiday -
I am so sorry to hear about your mom.My prayers are with you. Great write and good luck.
HALEIGH
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A very tender poem to a mother from her daughter, either metaphorically or literally. Great job! I'm trying to figure out what the background has to do with the poem, but I still like it.
Good luck!
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the background is actually the tattoo that i got on leg ... it symbolizes her ... and at the bottom it has my moms initals ... i got it because my mom is dying and it reminds me of her ... being mischievious when she dies and always being around me ... knocking things over to let me know her presence is here ...
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Makes a very pleasant read.Like the background and how you have set all the lines up. But please add the option #
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