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It's Melting

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DRIP

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DROP

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DRIP

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Written October 2nd, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Kylia Skydancer
    October 16, 2006
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    *grins*

    thanks.


  • plinkyponk
    October 14, 2006
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    i like little drips and drops plus you have illustrated the poem with drops and drips all dripping and dropping down marvellous work go to thetop of the class