Shall we dance in morning twilight
Where stars kiss the dawning sun
New visions of life begun
Let us ride the moonbeams of love
Our gift cherished from the heart
Where passion struck from the start
New visions of life begun
Past memories fast fade
New stepping stones are laid
Where passion struck from the start
Love, mine to freely give
The gift in which we live
New stepping stones are laid
Let us ride the moonbeams of love
Shall we dance in morning twilight
A gift granted from heaven above
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Written October 2nd, 2006
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Storm -
Absolutely beautiful
Again, your words float. They are beautiful, dream-like quality. Etheral. I love it. -
Thank you for the kind comment.
Storm -
interesting, beautiful and fantastical!! great imagery perhaps could become a song?
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Thanks hun, truy appreciate it.
Storm -
Thank you Tes, I appreciate it. And no one's one piece is better than the other really, just different views.
Storm -
Keith, it amazes me that you can read so deeply into things I write. I mean, I know a lot of people probably can, but, well thank you for your wonderful words. It means much to me.
Storm -
This is a great write, the emotions are so strong! and the rhyme works quite well... Nicely Done ~Dini~
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Storm...
I am sitting here and wondering what I could say to match this most beautiful poem you have written...
Love the gift from up above
making us surrender to it
giving us strength in time of need
dancing on the clouds above
beautiful memories never to be lost
caring for each other
and spending blissful hours
in each others arms
I really loved this and you inspired a little piece created just for you...Nothing compared to yours obviously...
Thanks for sharing hun...
Love ya
Tes
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Beautiful
I feel the hurt even now even though it is a sonnet of love.
The stepping stones so carefully placed your eyes open in hope that this time you can trust.Your feet bare as you walk across the stream, wise to the world yet wishing to be so innocent in love and need.
That the stream may turn into a river, of need,and the stepping stones washed away forever. Along with the past so that a new day and a wonderful love can grow, and run free within the vast heavens above, free and untainted.Just simple honest pure love.
For you I wish this more than anything dearest lady.
For if anyone deserves such a love.
It is you.
And when you see his eyes,which I know will be soon, you will fear no more to cross the stream,for you will feel the strength as he holds out his hand to guide you to him.
To a place in his eyes, where you truly belong.
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Thank you hun, appreciate it.
Storm -
This is beautiful, soft sensual and tender.
Great piece Storm
Adrian -
Thank you John, appreciate your comments always
Storm -
Thank you for the comments, much appreciated.
Storm -
great
Wow, what else can one say, this is another great write from the goddess of storms, you have outdone yourself, I really liked it, John -
Dear poetess
You are like wine
rushing to my head
sweet, bubbly and fine
leaving my lips red.
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Thanks love. It''s a style I created,mistakenly and it has just stuck. So now I have my own form of poetry, and other than acrostics, it's probably the only actual form I can write and not slaughter, lol.
Appreciate your comments hun
Storm -
I liked this. I haven't seen this style before. Good job sweety
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Thank you Jeannie. Just some inner 'longings' or dreams I suppose. Appreciate the comments.
Storm -
This flows with a beautiful melody. Your words are so loving . Thank you for sharing. Jeannie
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Thanks sweetie, appreciate it.
Storm -
You do this ripple thing so well. Yea, I know it's yours, but still. You make your words weave a wonderful picture, leaving your readers in awe of your emotions. Superb babe.
Jay
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