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my WORDS..my SHADES..my LIFE

The grave of my soul
The soul of my faith
The faith of my heart
The heart of my child
The child of my redemption
The redemption of my chance
The chance of my treason
The treason of my past
The past of my frames
The frames of my dreams
The dreams of my angel
The angel of my silence
The silence of my scream
The scream of my sorrow
The sorrow of my pleasure
The pleasure of my pain
The pain of my tears
The tears of my words
The words of my shades

The shades of my LIFE…..

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i really hope u like it guys its been a long time i didnt write anything..
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Written October 2nd, 2006

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  • SousOU
    October 29, 2006
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    hiii..thanks alot for the comment..i miss you alot..how's everything going around.hope your fine..take care and enjoy your time.

  • Miserable
    October 24, 2006
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    hey i like cant talk now but hey long time no read lol i noe ive been preety busy wel i wil catch up soon love ya xoxo awsome wright u stil avnt lost ya touch xoxo


  • SousOU
    October 4, 2006
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    hey gurle. thanks alot..i appreciate it ..speechless


  • Sadistic Monkeys
    October 4, 2006
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    Hey!
    Amazin poem back there!!! Really kool..
    I loved it!
    Keep up the great work.
    Take care,


  • SousOU
    October 3, 2006
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    hey thanks alot for your comment..i really appreciate it..

  • Athena24
    October 2, 2006
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    WOW! that is amazing....keep it up!

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