Saddened Heart.
Unsaved.
A Sinner with no name.
How does it make you feel?
I need...
JeSuS!
Because of you,
My Heavenly Father...
Salvation,
Baptism..
New Life!
This is me...
Blessed!
Thank you Lord.
Author notes
Before and after salvation. However, this doesn't BEGIN to describe what a blessing and life altering, beautiful state this brings. I am saved, free, and have a place in Heaven with Jesus. Thank you Jesus!! Amen.
Written October 2nd, 2006
A contest entry
- *TITLES* Contest by poetryality.
500 points, ended October 17, 2006, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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i just love your poem.
i kinda have my own relationship with God,
and it works well for me.
He happens to be my very best friend.
I talk to him offen, he probably thinks i talk to much lol.
i have so much to be thankful for, and i make sure to tell him how hankful i am as offen as i can.
i have such a strong faith.
anyway i really did enjoy your write, you have done a very excellent job.
manyblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Nice job on this one! I would truly like to see you develop this piece even further to show some of the more intimate struggles you have had and how the Lord helped you overcome! Many's to you dear sister! God bless you! Noble1
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.., and bravo again!
This is insightfully all our hopes wrapped nto one, Bravo. -
Yes, AMEN to that spiritvision angel. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts. Blessings.
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Thank you for the encouragement Katie. I appreciate your thoughts on this, it's one of my favorites. Blessings to you.
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Thank you Renee for such a sweet comment. It was such a delight to enter
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This is very spiritual and true! May many read this and follow!
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A very encouraging, spiritual poem. I enjoyed the idea of your poem beginning with a sad introduction, then at the end, your poem is very upbuilding and encouraging. You have chosen your titles well.
Well done and best wishes for the contest.
~Katie~
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Yes, it was easy to see the "before and after" in these words. Isn't it wonderful that salvation is right there, at reach for everyone. I love the salutation that this poem gives to the Lord and the inspiration to the reader. Excellent!
Thank you ever so much for the time spent to enter this challenge. I wish you all the best.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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It took a while to come up with cause there were so many things I could say, but I felt the best way would to express how he changed my life and my heart, how he freed me, but most importantly, a thanks for it. It was definitely a challenge, but a great one. I loved this contest. If you host more like it, let me know! Good luck judging. Blessings
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Dear Abreadcrumbandfish,
You've shown your love for the Lord well in the compilation of titles to make your poem.
This was such a challenge!
Good Luck in the contest!
Tang -
YES, I am definitely on my way! My husband and I had confirmation about starting a ministry, and he was also baptized in the Holy Spirit with the gift of tongues, and he's told us changes we need to make and just all kinds of amazing things. We've had the opportunity to lay hands and heal the sick...thank you Jesus!! I know that as long as you accept Jesus into your heart and live by the book of life that he has blessed us with you will surely have your place in Heaven. He has blessed each and every one of us with our own special skill. This pleases me more than you know that you are on the right path. God bless you. Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts on this, I greatly appreciate your time. have a great day! Blesings
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i am on my own road to god, i am trying to be a better son for him and i can see that you are on you way. i hope to be accepted in the house of the lord for he has blesses me with a greet skill and i know that now, you did a great job on this keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, and no words any man or woman can say will ever be able to describe the lord's blessing just right.
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