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When All Else Fails

When you're happy,
Smile real wide.
When you're sad,
Don't hold it inside.
When you're in love,
Laugh out loud!

When people walk out,
Try not to cry.
When you find what you want,
Hold onto it tight.
When your heart breaks,
Look up towards the sky.

And when all else fails...
Learn how to fly.

Author notes

Just something random really. I like the When All Else Fails line.
Written October 1st, 2006

Fixing Tomorrow

A contest entry

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  • Zraya218
    January 22, 2008

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    amazing

    wow, this is an amazing poem.
    i wanted you to know that you are truly talented. and i look forward to reading more of ur poetry =]


  • TheAshtrayGirl
    January 22, 2008

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    :)

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    That is so sweet!
    I adore this poem
    It's great from start to end
    And full of encouragement
    Excellent.
    Thankyou for entering my contest
    &
    Goodluck

    Jaz <3

  • Eots
    May 3, 2007
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    Magnifique. This is great. I love.


  • danario
    October 1, 2006
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    Sometimes, the best advice in life doesn't have to get all philosophical and complex. I think what we need so much really, is to be simple in our reactions and feelings. I really love how you capture the idea of reactings just simply. I agree that the all else fails line is really incredible. It just ties it all together. This was awesome!