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Winged Eyes

Passionate, heartfelt emotions.
Caressing thoughts and memories,
Numb embrace shattering love.
Night surrounds, blocks rays.
Part of me stays in you.
Woken dreams of flesh and blood,
Never reaching the clouds.
Wings and paper, ink and claws.
Parching thirst for thee.
Empty feelings lost in space.
Time always stealing me.
Nature scattering powder worlds,
Seeing people not in existence.
Mind overwhelmed with
Exstasy flooding the brain.
Flame and water, heat and steel,
Leave me be in this cold inferno,
Part my walls and stare at me.
Gates to hell paper thin.
Demons escape and pour to you.
Watching horrid, taken things.
Past love stabbing the present.
Lonely hands pleasure hearts.
Earth and skin, fog and eyes.

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Written October 1st, 2006

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  • phoenixspirit
    October 30, 2006
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    wow love this poem is great so much emotions and feeling! you are such a great poet keep up the great work!


  • GirlyLissa
    October 9, 2006
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    Love you!!!!

    Damn snippy i love you!!!!!!!sorry if ive been wierd lately and i still want to know what i did to annoy you! PLEASE PLEASE tell me.