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I am a product of your uncontrollable rage.
Just like the turn of a page.
All the same.
Actin' so very untame.
Hating life.
All I see is that knife.
Staring back at me.
Wanting to be.
[This urge do you even care?
Do I dare?
I'll slam you out.
You don't care about.
Anything I would die for.
Its in the opposite door.
How many times have I wanted to mistreat you.
Something I could not do.]
As the smoke rises.
Listening to your lies.
Don't.
It breaks me down.
You will never wear the crown.
Planning your suicide.
With nobody on your side.
Nothing for you to do now.
But wait and bleed.
Have you ever done a good deed?
[ chorus ]
I will finish you off.
As I take a puff.
Awaiting my own death.
fury growin in my wrath.
All alone.
without my bones.
I won't stand down.
Dressed in your worst gown.
[ chorus ]
(Doesn't matter)
Don't.
Don't.
Don't.
Don't.
Don't.

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Written October 1st, 2006

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  • gwynethshugart
    October 7, 2006
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    GREAT POEM!!!

    Wow. That is as simple as I can put it. Simply amazing dark poetry. Keep on penning, would love to read more of your work!