Your darling face within
my dark sultry dreams.
Cuddling in restless slumber,
heated moments I scheme.
Journey's on to the highway
like surfing ocean waves.
Honey coated words spoken,
drama I do not crave.
Trying to erase temptations
memories in azure blue.
Drunk, asleep and dazed
wondering what to do?
Knowing that I will never
find my way back to you!
This ardent enchantment is
a dream about who?
Does the road end here?
Author notes
Prompt: music inspire me to go in my own direction
"I see a young lady dreaming about her inflamed heart. Trying to keep her sanity after searching for this man in her dreams."
Written October 1st, 2006
A contest entry
- Dream Walking, Pillow Talking by PureCountry.
875 points, ended March 1, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Yes, Unanswered Questions,
don't you hate them, LOL. Your selection for the contest is rich with imagery and vivid details. Your use of descriptive words adds greatly to the content.
Thank you for sharing this offering and Good Luck in the contest.
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Nicely rhymed. The imagery and emotions came alive beautifully. Thanks for entering my contest!
DancingRed.
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Nice
I love the mystry of this piece. It keeps the mind wondering with dreams of our own. I like this one. Good luck -
well met-
This is a really nice piece! it flows really nicely, and it leaves you with a sense of sorrow and dispair. the fact that i can relate really adds to it as well.
another great write, Mummy, a great write!
may your fangs stay ever sharp-
Bella
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