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Desperate Kisses

/background by B Chandler/


You
Kiss me
Desperate;
Make me feel!
What I gave you,
Another
Forbidden fruit.
Discover the spirit,
Nocturnal lover;
Your turn,
Bring me that fire, my love.
Midnight masquerade
When doves cry;
Passion's expression,
Classic grace.
Rhythm of ecstasy,
My ecstasy;
Hollow soul,
Enraptured!
I am not
The bleeding heart.
Despair of the thorn,
Bound in misery's obsession;
Haunted seduction.

Author notes

This poem was written for a contest by taking some of my poem titles and combining them to make a new poem.
Written October 1st, 2006

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  • poetryality silver member
    October 15, 2006
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    Oh this is dark and seductive. I am loving the poetry entered in this contest and yours makes the hair stand on the back of my neck. That is a good thing! I simply love how this flows and the way it grips the reader. This is excellent.

    Thank you ever so much for taking the time to enter my challenge. I wish you the very best.

    Much Love & Many Blessings ♥

    Renee


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    October 1, 2006
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    this poem makes me wish i was across the sea...
    i like the idea of using oem titles to write a new piece,
    i once did that with all the titles of a band called Anathema,for a friend.