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I lie in my bed
surrendering
to gravity's call...
I breathe deep
then exhale
resting in the dark...
Fresh cool air
slips
through my window screens...
Autumn approaches
tender and silent,
kissing me softly...
I release and let go
falling
into the realm of dreams.
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Written September 30th, 2006
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Peaceful nocturnal rest has been inspired to me in this seasonal cool fresh breezy piece.You expressed one acute aware living gift of life in this.I'm now ready for a quiet nap,and I've only been awake an hour.Ha! Got me yawning and seeking out my blanky to snooze a little longer this a.m..~~Suseann
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I DONT KNOW WHAT TO SAY I THINK IM SPEECHLESS,I WAS'NT EXPECTING THAT,THIS IS A WONDERFULL POEM ONE THAT I WILL HAVE TO PUT ON MY FAVOURITES.THANKYOU FOR SHARING AND I LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR POEM'S.
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Beautiful!
Dear poet, This was worth waiting for! I love the entire feel of it, the bed, the air, the dreams to come. What joy to have a morning to wake up to and an evening to fall in to. This was so comforting to me! Beautiful! Jane -
When things are like this, why would we wish something else? Acceptance breathes through your words, and the beauty of the season.
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Gravity! Not just a good idea- It's the law! lol
Enjoy your dreams, and your "down" time, as much as you can considering the circumstances. Good to see you're still writing...
peace
doug
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It is great to see your pen is moving again. I wish you only the best of dreams, at night and in life. Dream lightly my friend, remembering that dreams are not real, for eventually we all wake up.
namaste-
TW -
Falling into dreams is as sweet and serene as falling into love. Come sweet Presence. Let us drift upong the turning colors and watch the wheel of life turn.
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So lovely and peaceful. Just makes me feel like climbling back into bed again. I just love that snoozy state.
Hope you are feeling better and better every day
Love Tara
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Yeahhh...what she said, Pres...C'mon, Sweetie...let's boogie...
'Twas wondrous to see you roamin' these hallowed halls once more, my Friend...Hurry back & stay longer next time...We all miss ya somethin' fierce...
Wanda
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Now you're suppose to get your lazy butt up out there and come dancin'
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How beautiful. How pleasant! Your voice seems softly silent, but their force is omnipotent. I hope you are doing better, my Friend!
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I loved this, Your words painted a picture in my mind and I could feel the fall winds gently blowing on my face and see the Autunm colors on the leaves falling on the ground
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