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Doppelganger

Missing image

My reflection wears a different

expression than my own.

It smirks when I turn away,

though it never lets it directly show.

Lately when I'm in a crowd,

I often catch a glimpse of me.

Behind columns, or plants,

whatever cover there might be.

I thought for a while that my memory

must have become a sieve.

When people would refer to my

statements...opinions I didn't give.

My mother clammed up almost a week

ago, she normally calls every day.

I called her a couple of days ago,

she acted cold, without much to say.

As if I had somehow offended her,

when I asked, she said "Let it go."

Certain I was aware of the reason

for her behavior, but I truly don't know.

Today, my lover sent me red roses,

the card said: "Last night was great!"

Last night I gave a lecture at the college,

so who or what went on that date?

I decided to make a report, and file it

with the authorities, talk with the police.

When I gave my statement, the officer said:

"Miss, we don't need two of these."

"Two? Why, whatever do you mean?"

"You filed this complaint already, 3 days ago."

"That's impossible officer, I did no such thing!"

yet the handwriting was exactly like my own.

I was beginning to be very frightened, thinking

I must be losing my mind.

Isn't there some condition that means fear of self,

"Autophobia" or something of that kind?

While I researched that, I came across a reference

that froze my blood as I read.

There are supernatural creatures called "Dopplegangers"

that're your double from toe to head.

They insinuate themselves into your life, your friendships,

family, lovers, career.

Eventually they take over, yet this says if you die, they die,

so how they do it isn't clear.

At last I fell into a restless, troubled sleep,

right there sitting up in the chair.

But that isn't where I woke up. I realized I

didn't recognize anything there.

In a sparse room with no windows

locked in tight.

I fell back in shock, realizing what'd happened,

I'd been replaced last night.


 

Author notes

Many Many times in my life I have been told upon meeting someone that they have met me before or seen my double...Or that I look exceedingly familiar. I know that this happens to people with a fair amount of frequency, but I have heard this literally dozens if not hundreds of times... Also instances of family members giving accounts similar to the experience of the roommate in this piece, where they have been surprised to see me in a particular place because they had just seen me somewhere else.

Can a person be in two places at once? There are many intriguing accounts throughout history of people who claim to have either encountered apparitions of themselves - their doppelgangers - or have experienced the phenomenon of bilocation, being in two separate locations at the very same time. This link will take you to a very famous and widely experienced instance of the phenomena:

paranormal.about.com/gi/dynamic/offsite.htm?site=www.mysteries.pwp.blueyonder.co.uk/1%2C1.htm

DOPPELGANGER is a German word which literally means "double-walker". There are a number of well documented witnessed accounts of the phenomena throughout history. One version of the legend behind it says that your doppelganger is your duplicate from another dimension who appears at times when you may need emotional support or advice. Another version says that seeing your doppelganger is an omen of your death. It is associated also with a phenomenon in the metaphysical realm called "bilocation" meaning to be in two or more places at one time, of which a signifigantly large number of documented instances have been reported to occur. Some believe it is a manifestation of astral projection. There have been scientific experiments that have created a version of the phenomenon through application of electric shock. Then there is another version that states that they are malevolent spirits who assume the place of the true person after securing their death. The various theories are all touched on at this link:
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Doppelg%C3%A4nger

One of these days, I wonder if I'll open the door to myself, saying: "TRICK OR TREAT!!"
Written September 30th, 2006

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  • Heartofacircle
    October 7, 2006
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    such a well done piece and a feeling often we do feel at times, thanks for sharing, keep up the awesome poetry here.......

  • Frodofan
    October 3, 2006
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    Oh, I saw the title and had to click (though it's misspelt in the title). I love this word... don't know why, but I just always have. An interesting little story you have here. It would certainly be a scary experience to be... "replaced."
    Edited on Oct 03, 1:41 p.m. because 'typo '.


  • DarkenedAuras
    October 3, 2006
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    OHHHH creepy~ I have to say this left me speechless and somewhat paranoid I already have plenty of phobias but seriously this was so awesome...at the beginning I thought you were talking about D.I.D. or Multiple Personality Disorder AKA Alter Ego Or Split Personality but this had a major twist bravo...I do hate to say that when it is true but you have written about it so spectacularly.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 3, 2006
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    This is great! Much like the Duribility Is..., you have a nack for this. Humor on the dry side. lol
    What a wonderfully, fun read.
    I will have to come back for more!


  • Raazi
    October 1, 2006
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    Ummmm.....sorta like a conscience deja vu. lol
    I've rarely seen free verse from you, and I think you're pretty good at it. Just work on the flow a little. When the site is upgraded, I will start a class on free verse....not just to teach, but to learn too. And I'd love it if you could join in. And as for the poem- magnificent.


  • paullallady silver member
    September 30, 2006
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    good

    This was a good story. It almost would have been better written as a story I think. to keep it as a poem, it is
    a little too wordy, it needs tightened up. But now that
    all that is said, omg I loved this!!! I have lived in six
    different states and I can guarantee that I have seen people
    in one state that look identical to someone in another state.
    they say we each have a double, maybe we do. I would love to
    see this rewritten in a tighter fashion. without all the extra, unnecessary words it would hit the reader even harder.
    good job.


  • DK akaLunaticSerene gold member
    September 30, 2006
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    No I love honest critiques!!! But now I want details!!! Where's it awkward and give me some sample fixes pleeeeeeaaaaseee!!!

  • TrudaKane
    September 30, 2006
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    Interesting

    That's really scary. Some people say there is someone who looks exactly like me but only older and that they've seen her and talked to her and found out she was born in the same area as me. Creepy. Anyway that is a really good poem and writing about your situation is really cool. Call me naive but I never actually thought about that sort of thing and honestly the first thing I'd try to find out was if I had a twin sister, not that there was a separate dimmension or something. Cool open-mindedness. Nice story, really strange situation. I pray that you don't die though, that would be bad.


  • JohnWaynePalsy
    September 30, 2006
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    save the whales and this poem

    dont take me the wrong way please.i see what you were doing here and it was cute and despite the faults i have with it i did enjoy it and find it very entertaining as a whole.but. the first say third of this was very awkward feeling to me.not one to mind a mess nor making a mess for that matter it doesnt so much bother me that its messy as much as it bothers me that theres something exceptional here thats hindered by it.there you have it and now feel free to beat me up,beat me down,mess me up beyond all recognition.for what its worth id do it again


  • OceanicEyes
    September 30, 2006
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    awsome!

    Love it DK! You always write with such great imaginaton and word choices, once again, are excellent! I am gonna have a hard time topping this!
    Awsome work my friend
    MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUAH!


  • PerVirtuous
    September 30, 2006
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    Excuseit

    Amazingly, when I dress in drag I look just like you. Perhaps that is the explanation. Perhaps not! Ha ha ha ha ha. Good lord. Such a funny thought. Your poem is exquisite. Thank you for the enjoyment.

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