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Half of me

Half of me is gone

I cant figure out why

what is making me so angry inside

what is making me so dizzy

what is making my heart break for hours of the day

cant stop this anymore

i have to write

write about all my feelings deep inside of me

hoping i can find what it is

maybe another side of me is reaviling

what is happing to me

something speaks in my mind

anger is apart of me

now that i cant express my heart and mind

i could explode into pieces

my heart aches of pain and blood dripping

Author notes

this is at the top of my head and i just wrote it because i cant express my feelings anymore without wrighting it in poetry and i have so much time on my hands that i cant write poetry. and my angry and happeniss and sadness feels like its fixing to explode.
Written September 30th, 2006

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  • Lionslove silver member
    November 5, 2006
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    sweetie...so sorry I didn't get back to you earlier. i've been dealing with alot of health issues lately. i soooooooooo missed you!! ...where have you been? ...and now...this write, has me concerned. i've been struggling with the proposal of a phone call...i've never done that before, so let's hold off on that for awhile. if you want to im with me, you can get me at: somewhereoutthere55@hotmail.com for msn mess. ...or ....dl4usee@yahoo.com for yahoo mess. I don't go on those much lately either, but am trying to get into the habit of opening them daily now.

    I hope you're ok....with much love .....Lionslove

    • Darkbabe
      January 24, 2007
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      hey

      thanks whats up ive not heard form you in like forever!!! sorry ive not been on but im at my mom and we dont have interent and i have to get on my boyfreind computer to check my email and all poetry but sorry ive got to go i am taking up this man's computer by the way im getting married!! yeah!! bye

  • Dark Nonique
    September 30, 2006
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    Very nice...it's kind of understandable, but not at the same time. I like that in a poem...Good job

    Price

  • Love Is Pain
    September 30, 2006
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    awesome

    OMGosh I can relate soooo much because I to have had my heartborken and sometimes I think I have forgotten about him then I will just have an ache in the pit of my stomach, and I just have to write to have it come out and leave! I APPLAUD this tremdously! GREAT JOB...and keep writting!

    Sarah