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If I Could

If I could turn these rocks to jewels
Or turn this sidewalk into stars
If I could turn swamps into crystal pools
I would do it all for you.

But jewels don't come from ugly rocks
And sidewalks are to walk on
Swamps are a mere place of trash
I realize as my dreams tumble down.

My dear please realize I wish I could
To repay you for loving me so.
But the only thing I can offer you
Is my heart, my love and my soul.

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Written September 30th, 2006

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  • Cody Heitzig
    August 25
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    GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Hey this is really goood.those are the three most important things to offer.but yeah great poem.Later


  • Robert Lee
    March 7, 2008

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    i remember this!

    aghem aghem.
    haha
    it turned out good, like 2 years ago.
    its been so long. ;]
    but this is a really nice poem!

    • lillmissunshine
      March 8, 2008
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      what are you talking about you remeber this? i'm confuseded!!!

      • Robert Lee
        March 10, 2008
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        haha

        you can delte this comment after i post it but if i remember correctly me and
        chelsea wrote the first two paragraphs of this for you to enter into a contest!
        haha. i wonder if chelsea remembers...

  • rockchick247
    November 4, 2006
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    amazing poem! very beautiful and fantastic flow! xxx

  • bradinrox4
    October 27, 2006
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    aww. its sweet. yeah i know surprise surprise. im on here yaay joanna. well i got bored during computers so i came on here and read your poems. and i loved them you are getting so much better at this. i wish i was as good as you. well email me soon miss you and lylas!


  • Sharcu silver member
    October 1, 2006
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    I know I've probably said this before, but I wish I had started writing when I was more around your age. You already have a wonderful talent and if you keep writing you could do anything with your talents in the future. Beautiful job!
    --Tim


  • Tangled Angle
    September 30, 2006
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    I really liked this a lot Kim, I just want you to know that.


  • SurelyWritten
    September 30, 2006
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    FIVE GOLDEN STARS

    Awww! This is beautiful Kim, truly beautiful. These words are truly inspired! I absolutely love, completely adore, this gorgeous poem. I LOOOOVE IT! I LOOOOOVE YOU!!!

    <3 shirley


  • FireyAura
    September 30, 2006
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    Aw, Kim, this is so sweet. Oh, the love you can feel when you are young. You just want to do anything to express your emotions. I completely agree and love this poem. Great write.

    ~*Chelsea*~

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