I scoop up the body of you my love, As you have fallen,
Rolling you onto your back and into my arms, something isn't right,
Holding you close to me like I've been gone for an eternity,
No movement from your body, No breathing from your lungs, Please no
Face without expression and the feeling of cold liquid on my hands, Don't be gone,
My heart explodes and leads my eyes to letter in your dead hand,
Reading through the pages I learned of her anger and sadness,
The love of my life, shall be my desire in death,
She bled away the pain of a life and slipped into sinful darkness,
You shouldn't have to suffer alone, I take your hand in mine,
I plunge the knife in hard and tear up my chest, A moment passes,
The voice of my love calling to me, She then appears,
Her hand, I take it once again as the darkness in gulfs us both,
Even though were falling, at least we are together again,
You are everything to me my love, I will forever love you...
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The love between us will never die...
Written September 30th, 2006
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Wonderful work like always sweety. I really like it. The lines are a like long, but it's still great. You did very well on this write. -kisses-
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Wonderful, it's a beautiful poem. It brought me to tears, wonderful job.
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I like but the lines are too long. It just seemed like a paragrahp all squished up maybe spacing it out for my eyes lol but everything else was truthful. Maybe a few orginal meaphor 3 probably would be good. Yet very thoughtful peice you never rushed at all. Lovely emotions.
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This Is wonderful. It's sad and sweet. You killed your self to be with your love. I only wish I could find a love like that. You're a lucky girl Crystal. He's has to be a wonderful man. I'm so happy for you. Great write. Love ya!
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