sometimes i wonder abut you
at the same time i cant even look at you
you make me sick
but i love you to death
this love of ours
is one hell of a turn
its sick and pettiful
but i love you and would raise hell all in the wrong places.
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Written September 29th, 2006
A contest entry
- He Broke Her Punk Heart.So She Broke His Emo Face (Prewrites Allowed) by Lady Nightshade.
600 points, ended November 11, 2007, 17 entries
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i may not be a fan of short stuff i do like this.the darkness is nice and brash but not too heavy.
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yes, that's the love I'm in. It sucks, but at the same time, nobody else better say anything bad....To the point, this poem was...Loved it !!!!!!
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