IDIOT
dumbass
INCOMPETANT
loser
WORTHLESS
YOU MISSED A SPOT
LICK IT UP
No, I won't
I can't
I'm sorry
You aren't eating right!
I'm sorry
I really am...
((tears roll down my face))
I'm so sorry
Please...
I HATE YOU
You can't eat right, you can't eat at all!
I need to eat,
Please don't take my dinner
EAT WITH THE DOGS BECAUSE YOU EAT LIKE THEM
Let me keep my fork, please?
SCREW YOU
shut up
FUCK OFF
i hope you die
((I don't even cry anymore))
Yes ma'am,
Sorry, ma'am
((fuck you ma'am))
I won't do it again
((you did it... you broke me...))
((Thanks, mom))
Author notes
sorry, verbal abuse from parental units not from significant other, but it is just as if not more damaging
Written September 29th, 2006
A contest entry
- "Your an idiot!...I'm sorry." by crushed.
300 points, ended October 3, 2006, 6 entries
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*hugs*
I'm so sorry you had to live with that.
I'll always love you, dearest.
The poem itself was excellent, even though that sounds terrible. I felt the pain and humiliation, and the rage. You have a talent for conveying emotion.
I miss you like woah.
love. -
I can't imagine living this...
I am so sorry if you had to...
I wish...no, I hope...you are happy now.
Love,
Lane -
If only parents had to get a license before starting a family, hey? It might make them think about how to deal with their kids in a more caring way. I'm sorry for your hard times. (By the way, it's 'incompetent'). Keep that pen moving!
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great piece
that may be the funniest thing ever.im sorry i mean not to take anything away from the horror of it but its fucking funny.i lived just like this and i laughed all the way through it because i found if i couldnt laugh id cry and i couldnt cry not only because i knew this would give satisfaction to my mommy but because crying is weakness and after all what doesnt kill us makes us stronger.this was great
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