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The Ace of Spades

The Ace of Spades

The citadels of opportunities
Are sent towards a persons way
For them to take and use for their
Own betterment this opportunities
Are lives task to prove your true
Worths

The proven tasks of these opportunities
Are the carrots and sweets we need to make
and take to make our lives one of fulfilment
The fulfilment of this lives are the continuities
Our stocks and Barrels need to be treasured
And this treasures our Ace of Spades

willy saint

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Written September 29th, 2006

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