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A dream path

My eyes saw sparkling of light,
which was making sky, too bright.

Shown me the path towards an endeavor,
to stimulate my sense as it now or never.

I too kept the faith and stepped over the golden path,
in hope of a fair destiny and success to bath.

Once again,these lonely way, calling some juvenile,
"come my dear its path to achieve and smile".

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Option 3 B
Written September 29th, 2006

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  • Princess-nee
    October 8, 2006
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    Wonderful,Seems like you are dreaming for ur desired path.Nice,The last line is very welcoming.Something beautiful about this poem is it's short & clear.Most importantly its written from your mind.