Sliver of silver surrounds
white cotton candy
brushes against a circle
of pure moon-glow.
Set against a backdrop
of deepest black velvet
studded with diamonds
shimmering light.
Author notes
Written September 29th, 2006
A contest entry
- Cloudy Skies by Samplette.
300 points, ended October 4, 2006, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oh... i loved this... magnificent image!
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Beautifully written. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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Lovely piece full of beautiful imagiary well done and good luck
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Beautiful
The inky night sky holds light still, in the form of diamond droplets, inspiring you to write what is. But you cannot touch or understand.
Yet it fills you with such wonder.
Within the beautiful marmalade night skies of your imagination! -
Thank you for your kind words
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ah the night, it is a great sight to behold, to watch the clouds lazily drift by. a good poem. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...
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