Two years later,
distance rips us closer together.
you talk to me,
but like your imagination,
i'm not there.
I leave you nowhere,
but like a you,
it stays everywhere.
I can't tell you how much
my mind wished you to say:
you need me not to stay,
but to go away.
my heart is tripping
over broken strings,
my ears they yell so loud,
my eyes they start to ring.
hun, you have made me a fool.
in and out of pride
to wander restlessly between my sheets.
to greet the winter with my
cold and empty shoes.
Author notes
It's ok if no one really follows this piece...it's not really meant to be \
Written September 29th, 2006
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i love this. i couldn't have read it at a better moment in time. while people may not follow your meaning of it, it's quite easy for others to find there own. thank you. it's wonderful!
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I think this is really awesome.
There are alot of meanings hidden in the lines of this poem that can be interperated in different ways which is awesome.
Well done.
xx


