There's no light at the end of the tunnel,
Just a dark hole I make my way through.
And I find that the deeper I venture,
I'm haunted by memories of you.
The darkness consumes me in such ways,
It's almost impossible to feel emotion.
But just then a tear runs down my face,
A reminder of your neglected devotion.
And I try so hard to forget you existed,
To ignore that the past had been there.
But this place has a way of bringing it all back,
It unfurls it and it becomes bare.
The pain strikes in a way I can't accept,
Almost like I've lost my mind.
In reality I've lost my way,
And I have both of these things to find.
I faintly see the way to reality,
I snap back and see the road can be cleared,
And every once-n-a-while I'm taken back to that place,
Just to be reminded,
It was real...
Author notes
Uh...given it a shot again...
Written September 28th, 2006
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Wow Eva. Holy balls that was fantastic. I'm almost happy that Todd has given me something to write about now. Lol. Sort of. Anyway, we need to catch up. A lot of stuff has changed. :/
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wow. this describes me to a "T". Great write...
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I miss you darling. How are you???
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You always write with such emotion and each write has a story of it's own. You're a beautiful person with a great talent. Never stop writing.
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same thing happens to me. i only write when i am upset too
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Hey hey there. Yeah I'm losin it...I hardly write a thing any more. Just when I'm upset really....I don't know..it's upsetting yet nice, because i'm happy I really have nothing dreadful to write about, BUT...I can't write anything that's in a happy tone either. It sucks.
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hey pretty cool... you started rhyming... i remember you being a free verse type of poet
long time no chit chat... hope all is miss -
awesome
sheesh hun, didnt have to shake off any rust here! its like you never stopped. this was really well written, i liked it very much. parts of it reminded me of me and what im going thru trying to get over jill. by the way, i cant tell you the whol story cuz im at my parent's house and the internet is very finicky, i dont know if this comment will even go through because the internet service is crap. i promise, i'll tell you all the details monday. should i email you at the email address i have or just IM you here on AP?
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