Now promise me forever like you did for all the rest.
I'm the one you beg for, so tell me I'm the best.
Whisper your sweet nothings, deep inside my head.
Fill this empty heart with love, your questions you must shed.
I ask of you this one thing, that must be done as well.
Give me all you have to give, and these secrets you must tell.
Close your eyes and make a wish on the brightest shooting star.
Think of me and hold your breath, just know I'm not too far.
Now promise me forever like you did to all the rest.
Now live for me and only me, I am your one true test.
Let me be your one true love, a testament to man.
To say that life without love is what you can't withstand.
Just one more line to give to you and my loyal guests.
Promise me forever like you do for no one else.
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Written September 28th, 2006
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nice
that was realyl sweet, some of you rhymes felt a little forced but it was a good poem. true. i likes it -
Beautiful and promising throughout. A great hope that someone will be ours and only ours one day, but how long can that truly last? Great write.
-Nick
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