A mixing cascade of colors
Show that autumn's here
Cool breeze will chill your bones
As if you are in fear.
Green leaves of health have depleted
And are now lifeless on the ground
Crimped and wrinkled...and a rustle
Is their whisper...their only sound.
The trees are naked, baring all their bark
As the cold of Winter starts to call
But a new bloom will be here in Spring,
This happens every single fall~
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Written September 28th, 2006
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I like this poem because it makes me feel like i am actually there. That I'm freezing and watching fall come close...
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"cascade of wonder" ! the title rocks and the write too is just awesome !! i just loved it !! the rhyming was just so cool !!
The trees are naked, baring all their bark
As the cold of Winter starts to call
But a new bloom will be here in Spring,
This happens every single fall! ( my fav lines )
thank you so much for this wonderful write ,
your well wisher ,
-truthwriter- -
nice new insight to Fall and the effects of it all
thanks for your entry
Tamara
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