a pair of falling angels
coming undone.
half falling,
half flying
away
from what they're not.
wings entertwining,
souls combining
as they fall
from the sky.
2 shooting stars
in one night.
rather than part
they'll risk the dark
uncharted tomorow,
for the others heart.
no sence in settling
for what you've got.
they'd rather throw it all away.
just to try and save the other.
both fighting
for the others life.
both believing
that they're right.
both trying despritly to save
what the other threw away
for them.
no way to tell
if they'll last.
broken hearts
are made of glass.
no way to tell how far gone
one is with the ohter.
two hearts
set on flame.
they'll both go down
rather than separate.
a broken loves second
time is so desprite.
Author notes
Written September 28th, 2006
A contest entry
- Wanted: Drunken Angel Poems by Amera.
1500 points, ended July 15, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Wonderful, fast hard hitting read. Good luck in the contest.
Love,
Amera ♥
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drunken angles contest
okok ok i know it doesnt say thyr drunk.
but it was kinda in my head? -
great job
wow meg this is realy good,you are such a good poet, love them, this one is great though,lol, keep it up hun(i used your word, ha ha ha ha ha)
ttyl, or now
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