Lord I want to stop my sinning
To abide with you, to see the light
To change my losing to winning
Lord I want to stop my sinning
To be reborn, a new beginning
To bask with you in spiritual delight
Lord I want to stop my sinning
To abide with you, to see the light
Author notes
Written September 28th, 2006
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A contest entry
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Very nice
A fine triolet this is on repentance and submission
Thank you!
All the best to you! -
Beautiful words. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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I enjoyed the smooth flow of this! You have form well laid out and the metre is rather consistent.
Thanks for entering!
-Reni -
A wonderful triolet of repentance. Thank you for entering.
Sam
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So profound for such a short piece! This pretty much says it all! Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!
Frog~
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