The questions never stop now,
Neither do the stares now,
My clothes are baggy now,
I'm in the crowd now,
My hands shake now,
My head spins now,
I can't think straight,
But I look great,
My friends say I look
pale, But I don't care,
I look in the mirror now,
I see a pretty, thin, girl
But I'm wasting away
I think i need help now
Someone please save me
It's hard to breathe now,
My heart is pounding out
of control now, I'll think I'll go
to sleep now, Goodbye forever
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Written September 27th, 2006
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I like it. Nothing's held back.
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hey i like this poem it really puts out your feelings on how people look at you... but dont give up... it s what you feel on the inside that counts.. as long as you are proud of your self that is all that matters... if they are your real friends they wouldnt care how pale you look... i have been there and back... and now seriously i look back and thank everybody for being there for me... kind of what i have been through ... but as far as the poem i really like it... keep up the good work...
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Kelsey, are you ok??
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