I see your true face,
behind That pretty and Innocent lace,
that everyone sees in your place,
rather than your natural face.
you always seem to be real nice,
you make my skin crawl as with lice.
knowing that your smile is so precise,
and it's all through others price.
i hate all your lies and pretense,
that you take too far with extense.
no feelings for others or the ex-pence,
for this amazing act i feel so intense.
secrets of your life you hide,
so others can't see your other side.
for the ones you hurt you've never cried,
i swear I'll unmask you and with pride.
you crossed me with your first boost,
what was I? your practice goose?
it was then you put your neck to the noose,
believe me, I'll let the truth loose
your whole world is cotton wool ,
over every ones eyes you constantly pull.
here's something that you should mull,
your life will never be full.
i see you with your false face,
running in an unhealthy race.
but be warned at your god like pace,
I'll trip you and you'll fall from grace.
everyone will see you for real,
all your false layers i shall peel.
get ready for your last meal,
cos I'll never rest til you keel.
if your gonna stay the same,
and carry on to play this game.
i warn you in this game is my fame,
because i kill and never maim!
Author notes
about backstabbers, and false people “everything I had is gone”
A contest entry
- Darkness, Let Me See Your Darkness by AshesFromFire.
700 points, ended July 21, 2007, 79 entries
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WOW! there is a lot of emotion in this!
Nice job with the rhymeing! That must have taken some time!
Bravo!
Good job!
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you're right, i do really like this poem...it takes a while to see through people's tricks but it looks like u finally have. great read =] --callah-lynniz
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I like the Rhyme scheme in this! Good work~



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