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truth

"I can't lie to you" he said


"Why?" she said



"Because," he said




"I love you."



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Written September 27th, 2006

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  • Temujin
    February 28, 2007

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    Well, I don't know about the rhyme scheme, or the validity of the sub-plot, and the characters need development.


  • Subiri Ars Poetica
    January 28, 2007

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    i miss my unsung goddess of night. where's your dirty novel?

    by the way, how's canada? still cold?

    mark


  • Kylia Skydancer
    September 30, 2006
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    this is...different...


  • Nyx Iscariot
    September 30, 2006
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    i'd thought of more later, but it didn't really sound so great...so i didn't post it up.

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  • Nyx Iscariot
    September 30, 2006
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    yes?

  • Kylia Skydancer
    September 27, 2006
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    ...

    Nyx?

  • A Prophet of 3 gold member
    September 27, 2006
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    hmmmm ........ interesting

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