What have I done to you?
Am I not good enough to considered your
"friend"?
One day you decide to completely ignore me
And why?
Have I annoyed you or bored you..
What have these six years meant to you..
You just want to throw the memories
Away?
Was it something I did to hurt you?
Or was it something I didn't do.
Was is when I stopped following you around
Like a puppy dog?
Did that hurt you or make you angry?
What about when I gained independence
Did that bother you?
Or when I started to hang out with other friends
Did that make you jealous?
Is that really why you decided to end our friendship?
Or act like I wasn't worth your time..
Because I don't buy that
Author notes
Option 2
Written September 27th, 2006
A contest entry
- Show me your best! by Hadji Murad.
300 points, ended November 13, 2006, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Deep but brought out the point.
I loved it. I have problems with my friends and one in particular that we're kind of going through this problem.
Very good.
Keep writing!
[Don't I sound like a 1st grade teacher or something? 'Keep up the good work!]
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Thanks for the comment and applause!
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Very interesting and unique write.
When friends disappear it is hard.
Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie D Hunter
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