I saw some of my past lives
and funny was it that I saw
A specialist at throwing knives
and an artist that couldn't draw
To my shock I had also seen
I was a FEMALE drinking tea
I looked up at that screen
Thinking "This can't have been me
I told this story to a friend
Her Response : "Oh my god you were what?"
The laughter has no end
What I was in a past life, I'd have never thought
Author notes
Written September 27th, 2006
A contest entry
- Cheer Me Up In Rhyme by piccola.
700 points, ended November 24, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thank you for this entry. Fun thinking about past lives isn't it? I don't believe that way but sometimes think what if?
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This is cute, and actually says much more then the words at first show. Well done! Of course I look forward to reading all of your stuff and seeing your creativity in rp!
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LOL, very very cute and funny! Thank you for entering my contest and the best of luck to you!
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Now being female is not so bad. In your past life you could have been an ant OR.............A TREE and made into A........
ROLL OF TOILET PAPER.LOL.
Good luck in the contest.
Good Jobber
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ths was a very cute poem. i chuckled out loud, keep up the good work ans thank you very much for sharring ths
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lol that was pretty darn funny!! though i do wish it could have been longer, still lol!!!! some pretty funny stuff lol keep it up man keep it up
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Some certainly believe in past lives and living as another soul previous to this one, and before that etc. Interesting take on this challenged themes in this contest. Easy to read and understand.
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